Ocean City NJ Summary

My Ocean City, NJ edits were left for last and were unfortunately rushed due too time constraints. I chose to edit the Ocean City, NJ article because I have been going to this shore since I was young. The shore has a sentimental value to me so I tried to add that to the article. My first edit I made to the article was removed because the person who edited it said it was only a point of view. My second edit replaced my first edit and added more on the family oriented shore. My final edit reinforced my first two edits with a link to beach house rental available for summer. My edits came from my personal experiences at the shore and also a website that is mentioned in my last edit. Overall my impact to this article was small, but I think thanks to my contributions the reader can get a better idea about the shore aside from geography and demographics.